World of Weird Al Yankovic

Posted: **Sun Aug 17, 2003 9:18 pm**

If "John" refers to Bermuda, it's spelled Jon. I can't stress that enough.

So in conclusion: JON. JON. JON. Ixnay on the "H." :biggrin:

Posted: **Sun Aug 17, 2003 11:58 pm**

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Posted: **Mon Aug 18, 2003 12:43 am**

I think that was "John" answering the question regarding the time.

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Posted: **Mon Aug 18, 2003 4:16 am**

Scotti,answering your question,John was the first name that came to my mind,it just so happened to be the same name as Jon's(but with a h),and Sploich yes he was answering a time question.

Posted: **Mon Aug 18, 2003 4:19 am**

COULD SOMEONE TELL ME WHAT THEY THINK!!!

Posted: **Mon Aug 18, 2003 5:33 am**

I think it's getting much better. The extra talking is good, and adds a lot to the play. Are you planning on adding more to it? If you do, I think you could really have something going for you. I know I would pay to go see this. If I have one constructive criticism, it's that some of the scenes(mainly the bus and the waffle one) seem a little detached from the rest of the scenes. There needs to be a little more of a connection. Other than that, you've got yourself a hit!

Posted: **Mon Aug 18, 2003 5:41 am**

QUOTE There is no John 7:27

From the Bible, King James Version:

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John 7:27

Howbeit we know this man whence he is: but when Christ cometh, no man knoweth whence he is.

Having a Bible nearby paying off! :biggrin:

Posted: **Mon Aug 18, 2003 6:03 am**

One thing that I think needs work, is that Al seems to have the lesser part. Most of his answers are one word. Almost as if he was the straight man.

Posted: **Mon Aug 18, 2003 6:09 am**

There's no antagonist in this story at all?

Posted: **Mon Aug 18, 2003 6:32 am**

QUOTE There's no antagonist in this story at all?

Well, if you want to be literarily analytical about this, I would guess that the antagonist is Al's ensuing obsession-induced insanity.

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